Aww thats mean...good poem though..i guess thats kind of how i felt deep down but i dont love myself that much

That was mean but it had some honesty to it. i liked it good job

Haha! This was amazing!
I love it, so positive, really inspirational. :]

5/5

I loved the last line lol it was mean but it was still very good!

Lol.. it took a very unexpected twist at around the middle, and the end was kinda shocking to me.. never saw it coming :P.. well, i lykd ur rhyme, but the flow wasn that gr8.. umm, this isnt reli the kind of poem id read, tho u did a job of letting him noe that ur over him and moving on.. i think u need to change ur title to make it shorter..
take care
NannO