by nadsyy Mar 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
~ i was bored and i just wrote what was in my mind lol~ |
by Jacintha
Very great poem. |
by Corruption
Wow.... just wow this is wonderful it gave goossebumps like 3 times lol. and id like to say that i liked the part about the brother keeping u alive to suffer a punishment like that that was a very smart way to put it. i wouldnt have ever thought of that goodjob |
by lana
That was great |
Wow, that is weird. I have nothing to say. It's just awkawrd, but it's good. I gave it 4/5 |
by Jessica
Datz a rilly good poem! hehe.. itz good to let out ur feelings, i think it really helps.. loll.. good job! keep writing! |