Wow...nice poem

Woah...freaky =/

thanks for the comment
keep up the great work :)
kat

This is relly good i love it...xoxo\

ur welcome thanx for uc omments

This poem is definatley interesting, can't say i've read anything like it! however i really enjoyed it! well done... luv em

Wow loved it

love caz

That waz crazy but goosd but damn did he have to shoot da doggy n kitty lol

Datz a rilly good poem! hehe.. itz good to let out ur feelings, i think it really helps.. loll.. good job! keep writing!
jessy

Wow, that is weird. I have nothing to say. It's just awkawrd, but it's good. I gave it 4/5

That was great

i agree wif every1 up above

5/5

lana

Wow.... just wow this is wonderful it gave goossebumps like 3 times lol. and id like to say that i liked the part about the brother keeping u alive to suffer a punishment like that that was a very smart way to put it. i wouldnt have ever thought of that goodjob

keenan

Very great poem.