Good Job Beautiful
It flows and it makes sence
Good For You

Hope to read more writing soon
~.~ Mia ~.~

*tear, tear!!* Kris

Theres a Song about The River Of life too...its a good christian song..
i have it somewhere in my house...lol
Awesome Job
GREEAT GREEAT GREEAT
your really good
5/5
~TBOY~