That special someone

by ...   Mar 6, 2006


Hey pplz. i REALLY dont like this poem. i had like, writers block when i wrote it nd i culdnt think. we had to write it for a compteitition nd i wanetd mine to b different.. anyway, rules were the name had to b that special someone any type of poem but less than 16 lines. hope u guys like it more than i did, tell me what you think :)

When I wake thoughts of you fill my head,
So too do regrets for those words unsaid.
The dreams of us are credulous
Till slowly you fade nebulous.
I want to be with you all the time,
Being apart should be a crime.
Thoughts of you are incorrigible,
My love is undeniable,
I just wish that I could be with you.
I wonder if you wish for me too?
But never will I let my feelings show.
Never will you ever know.

credulous - gullible, easy to believe
nebulous - shadowy figure
incorrigible - of a habit that can not be corrected

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