by kelly waldron Mar 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Welcome the house of rising sun |
by sandra young
Its actually a nice poem , be careful to check your spelling. pour should be poor. bob should use a capital B, its a proper noun. your title "She dditn understand. you misspelled didn't. I don't mean to be critical, but it helps you on your next write, and to become a better poet. |