Beautifully written, strong poem, well done x

Yeah right on

Uh that's so touching

There are some good descriptions and ideas, but some overused ones too, which disappointed me. I liked the final stanza it was very emotive and thought provoking in a saddening kind of way. Maybe capitalised every "I" to make it grammatically correct. Keep writing.

Lovely poem - it really struck my heart because I feel the same - I think :) Keep it up!!

Peace. [Sole]