Thanx alot gurl,well it reminded me of ma x boyfriend who wuz such an azzhole and it took me a while to get him off my mind but now hiz suffering cuz he wants me still but he cant have me so yea thatnx for the 5 gurl b safe 1 luv

-StylezWifey-

This is really good. I love it!! Keep it up, and thanks for commenting on my poem!! Love lots.

Omg..i love it..i can relate to it too...maybe thats y i love it...keep writin...please...

kenya dawn

Omg I love your poem. i feel the way you do. i think a lot of people can relate. you're writing is very expressive and i think you'll go far.

good job!

if you could, check out some of my poems, that'd be awesome!

Thanks,
Kelly

Dam this is a deep and cute poem it relates tome in a way keep it up and keep your head up too. i love this poem!!

I no how u feel through and through except well i was the one who let him go but he deserved it he broke my heart into an infinate amount of pieces and now his with my ex best friend. i no how u mean with this poem but i can promise u this much, after a while ur heart will stop living as much but then again with me i just stoped all contact with him and yet even now everytime i see him in school my heart brakes but it is less painfull. the pain does go away, it take sa long time which u probs dont wanna hear but in time it will go away and in time u will find someone else but the best thing u can do is not let him come back. as for the poem ittself, i love it how u put ur feelings and pain into questions and make the reader think further than the words and i love the feeling that u have poured into this. i suppose i understand after biewng with this site for a few months why it is that the best poems are ones about love or heartbrake because those are the things which you right completly from the heart not caring about wt comes on the paper. i love this peom and i think it really reflects ur feelings and well i no ur hearting but i can tell u that ur not alone ppl do go through this and are going through this now and if u ever wanna talk ppl in this site are always happy to talk and im always here if u ever need a caring ear to listen and help.well erm take care and i hope u get over him sooner than later it saves u getting hurt more and i no this might be a lil insensitive but id appreciate it if u commented on some of my poems and rated them i think that u might even find some of them helpful. 5/5 btw.

This is good

Hey girl dat was really really good i no just what u were getting at cuz some one did dat same shyt to me b4 its confuizing as hell but w/e well holla back at cha girl!

WOW...Omg I loved it....Your one of my favorites now...I feel the same way!!!....I really wish some one knew the answer...well keep it up!!! 5/5
ML- Heather

Hey this is great! You should keep writing i kinda get were u are coming from

Hey
wel i wanted you to know
this happened to me
and he says it but he doesnt really mean it
he doenst want you to stop jsut dnt give up
keep on loving him and
keep on trying to show him how much you love him bu t also give him some space ....becaue he wants to see how you reaact without him he will be wathching you even though you dont know it .. my x and i are now together he noticed how i lvoed him
keep up the peoms and good luck with him
marissa

Wow girl that was awsome. i really enjoyed it like i always enjoy all your peices. i know exactly how you feel. its hard to lose someone you love. people that come and go out of our lives leave such marks that we cant help but always have in our hearts. so anways great job!!!! hope everything works out.
~lilia~

Well done i really like this sad but well expressed i know how you feel xxALLYxx

Hey!

Wow! Your poetry is very very very awesome! Thx for the comment on my poem:) anyways nm to say. byebye

vanessa_~* xxx

Very beautiful...I loved this poem ;)

This is a wonderful poem. such beautiful flow of rhyming I wish I could write like you! Keep up the great work, Your on my favorites list now, I read your poems and comment on them all the time. If you find the time can you check out some of mine too, I would greatly apperciate it :)

This is amazing. i am going through this exact thing right now. and when i read this...i cried.

Wow girl you know how to write a poem... good work... it took my breath away... i know how u felt wen u wrte it.. im going thru the same thing.... he wants me to forget but how!!! its tooo much love to just erase!!!

Wow. Beautiful. This poem is the very opposite of one of my poems. Check it out, maybe you'll forget him. Mine talks of finite love.

I can't even put in words how great that was
you put so much emotion behind everything
you must be really hurting and i hope you get better ! 5/5 <33