A Prayer

by End Of Eternity   Mar 6, 2006


Kissing dust in front of a cross
flying hands while knees embracing ground
just a thought that came across
if my tears could reach his ears as sound

with sealed quaking lips of mine
and blood around my hands
even a blind knows, i have been cryin
wonder someday you too understand

its not me i am asking for
as i have left that hope far too back
just a girl living next door
if you could bring her life back in track

if you could give her smiles which you kept for me
if you could spread roses on her path of misery
and just let the thorns be my reward for honesty
capture me forever and let that evil soul set her free

i swear i would not mind to sleep in flames
as it just doesn't matter how deep you are falling
when you are staring above
who cares about me and my brutal world
when its only about the one you love

this life i lead carries nothing anymore
as i know the fact that i cant be with her
so please bless the one living next door
as this life of mine drifts a step further

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    So deep and intense. This prayer you have prayed in this piece. Is my wish for you. To be happy and smile. Enjoy your life and find happiness in what you have been blessed with. You are the best man I have ever met and have a beautiful heart and soul. May God Bless you with happiness and love for the rest of your life.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    This poem is fantastic, Very powerful, your very talented, keep writing so I can keep reading.Take care Sarah.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    How ure words flow is really amazing. a special poem with all means.

    love,
    wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by hottie_w/a_body

    You have done it again. You have made me cry. You have such an amazing talent. Amale with such a sensitive heart is hard to find. THis girl is lucky whoever she might be. I would almost give anything to find a guy with such a heart as you. You are one of a kind. keep writing your amazing poems. They are inspirational.

  • 18 years ago

    by .::BrokenHrt::.

    Wow you are a terrific writer..beautiful poem....and thanx for the comments on mine means a lot XoX

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