Awesome poem Nitin..........
ur words were amazing......very heart touching

take care
Bharti

A prayer like this doesnt need any comments, it only needs a salute.

Lots of Love
Michelle

A selfless act of love is priceless! So is this poem for that matter. Touchingly inspiring piece!

hugs and smiles,
Mary

Wow... sacrifice is basically another word for love... i really liked the message u conveyed in here.. beautifully worded..
Oh, and i loved this line -
" I wouldn't mind sleeping in flames"
that was mind blowing.. it reached the deepest part of my heart... great work..
and ofcourse, it isn't possible for me to give any of your work anything less than a 5...
keep writing...

Love,
Ipsita

"A Prayer" hmm.... well I don't know waht to say.. This poem was so unselfish.. you would give up ur happiness to make the one you love happy.. kind of like sacrifice for love:) Very well written and a prayer like this should always be answered.

Nicely written. good word use and flow. keep it up.
as always~ kate

Hey, naam badal diya kya? sounds perfect anyway!

lovely work this - i think this is one of the best you've written!

good luck and peace
shobhana

It's good...nothing much 2 say about this..just awesome...

Thats such a sad touching poem , u have great way with words.

Even a blind knows, i have been cryin
wonder someday you too understand

Those lines gave me chills, powerful!! Terrific poem I truly did love it! I agree with Monique a 100% when you sacrafice your happiness for someone elses the prayer should always be answered and when you believe hard my friend, it will! Beautiful poem!!
Chelsey-Lynn

Wow you are a terrific writer..beautiful poem....and thanx for the comments on mine means a lot XoX

You have done it again. You have made me cry. You have such an amazing talent. Amale with such a sensitive heart is hard to find. THis girl is lucky whoever she might be. I would almost give anything to find a guy with such a heart as you. You are one of a kind. keep writing your amazing poems. They are inspirational.

How ure words flow is really amazing. a special poem with all means.

love,
wishes

This poem is fantastic, Very powerful, your very talented, keep writing so I can keep reading.Take care Sarah.
5/5

Nitin
So deep and intense. This prayer you have prayed in this piece. Is my wish for you. To be happy and smile. Enjoy your life and find happiness in what you have been blessed with. You are the best man I have ever met and have a beautiful heart and soul. May God Bless you with happiness and love for the rest of your life.
Love Cindy