I Don't Believe

Thank you everyone for your comments! And yes, I do know that someday the pain will go away.. it's just so hard when your going through it. I hope everyone can relate! Thanks Again!
Xoxo Shalisa Dawn

Powerful poem. Many people will be able to relate to this poem as everyone goes through it…at least once. We’ve all felt like (or will at some point) we’ve had our only chance at love and that’s it. You clearly got your feelings out and shared with us a fear so many hold. Very nice write…I enjoyed…the flow was smooth and the rhythm was on point! :)

This is soo true...I no how u feel cuz I feel da same way too.rlly excellent work & sooooooo true words cos all of them just play us then throw us away like were nothing

I dont believe in Happiness
Not without you there
I don't believe in a Healing Heart
Mine is Broken Beyond Repair

i love this poem, its so true and i love how u've put it so that seems like u beleived all these things when he was with u but now his gone his made them seem like lies and like nothing is worth what it was befor. i love it and i can promise one day the pain iwill go away.

Amazing writing
everything flows together, I love it
5/5

--Jasmyn

Wow, i must admit, this is really good. loved reading it.

all the best and take care
5/5