by Sarah Ashley Mar 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Hesitant for your affection |
by Daze
Very sweet and thoughtful, no need to improve on this poem it's very good, your agood writer, so keep writing, i gave you a 5/5. |
by Synh
I liked the idea behind the poem but you seemed to rush it. You are such a talented writer and have much potential. Try making the poem a little longer, like, stretch out some of the verse. |