Awesome poem...long time i hard someones life is planed...it sound that u gave up...i liked it go read next:)

Great poem! I really liked it. I can kind of relate to it. I think trapped is a good title for it...i also have a poem called trapped, but it's about somethin different. Keep up the good work!

I liked the title, I thought it fit the poem well. I really liked the poem, it was very well written, and it flowed well. It all made alot of sense together. It sounds like it has alot of feeling put into it, and that's GREAT! Keep up the great work, and HANG IN THERE!! If you wanna talk you can always e-mail me, I'M HERE!

Hey I loved it!! Trapped is good name for it!!