Comments : What it would of been like....

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Nice poem hun..sad. There are a few typos but otherwise the flow was good.
    I can't say ive wondered these questions before..i know it sounds horrible but sometimes i think more like: "what would it be like if i had grown up in a different home".

    Im glad ive found u and ur writing again..hopefully talk on msn soon..a lot to catch up on:P
    Love ya hun xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by cherish

    This is very good and powerful...i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by beyond help

    Great poem
    5/5
    keep it up

    bEyOnDhElP

  • 18 years ago

    by alexa

    This is a really sad poem even more so if it is true if it is im sorry