It is not often you find a sad love poem but this was an awesome poem
kepp it up

Aww, this was sweet :) It sounds very picturesque and dreamy and I like how it's simple with no sudden twists turning it into another lost-love poem! I like how you have written it as if you are telling it to someone - sometimes using just basic, everyday language is the best way to get what we are trying to say across! I also liked how you managed to add in the 'i love you's' without sounding cheesy! I'm still trying to get that aswell but it's not working lol. The only thing I'd recommend is adding some full stops in. Nice poem :)