Save her before she fades away

by ღMőŁŀŷ ĹůvÅ¡ Ũღ   Mar 6, 2006


The smile she wears is no longer true
She feels so lonely, because of you.

Deep inside she has no pride. She wants to forget and move on. She wants to be happy, its been so long.
She feels like its time to just give up, she cant stop fighting, must be tough.

The depression is dark and killing her slowly, she feels so out & o so lonely.

Choking so, letting go. Slowly slips and drifts away. As she waits for a better day.
She waits for it to come. dont be fooled by her smiles, she isnt having fun.

W/out him shes nothing
and she knows that so
thats why she refuses to let go.

So she carries on with only memories, they used to be lovers, now they're like enemies

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  • 16 years ago

    by Freedom

    So she carries on with only memories, they used to be lovers, now they're like enemies

    :( so sad and so fantastic.i loved this poem.pls dont tell me u are going through all this :( so sad

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    This was a lovely poem i really enjoyed the only thing i would say is that the story was a bit disjointed lik it didnt flow from one stanza to the next but each stanza was good and i liked it all the same a great job :D
    xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by .x.bєαuтιfulє lιє.x.

    Hey i really like this poem the words flow well, thanks for the comment and stuff on my poem

    xoxo Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Snowdrift

    Wow your so good! I really like this one! Its something alot of us can relate too, not in the same way but in someway. It seems like you just poured your feeling onto the page and then turned them into great writting!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    The last line's great, a brilliant poem, it's so sad but an excellent read. Keep on writing hun 5/5 x

    p.s. thanks for your comment xx

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