Another melancholy write... It's a shame when friends don't talk... The ending in this is quite heart breaking!! Great write!!

Awww....Hugs Chelsey.....It's sad when we think friendships are fading but hopefully it won't....Sending you a big hug....haven't been on much lately, been sick with a old cold.....still isn't gone, but I'm a little better. I love ya and take care.

love ya, Ann

Thats lovely, well writen and really good choice of words. i wish you all the best and you are a great writer by the way god bless * xxx

Incredible poem! 5/5 all the way. And I hope everything works out for you. I know the pain friends can cause.

Another great write from you. I want to know where have you been all my life? :P .. or at least.. these past few weeks! lol .. good poem .. you are uber cool :D

*claps wildly* Great poem! Really sad though. Made me remember all of my friends I had to leave behind. 5/5!!

I know who this be about :o( Have you showed her girl? Have you told her you feel this way seriously...I think you shoud try you owe to yourself to her and to your friendship to at least be honest about how you feel. I have no doubt at all that she misses you as much as you miss her - and in reality babygurl thats what friends are for. We all have our ups and downs but its really about the love felt and how we come together when we need each other the most true?
Great write babes, good flowing rhythm I enjoyed it very much xoxox

Awww Chels my baby girl , I can feel your heartache throughout this entire piece . I only wish I was there with you . We could eat ice cream and talk for hours .It hurts me so much knowing how sad you are .

I don't know hun ....maybe it is time to make a move and start a conversation....I don't know.....
I just hate for you to hurt so much and I can't be there to help you.

E-mail me Chels ...so I know you are ok !
Love ya lots A.I.D XXXXXXXX