So much emotion and feelings. great job. i know how you feel...but don't kill yourself. stay strong.

Short and powerful. the length gave more strengh the to the words and message themselves. i hope this is not how you really feel. thanks for the comment! your writing is amazing.

Ruby

Short but nonetheless effective. You write with a confident you know what your about and how you want to say it. Superb!!

[lost_laureate - come find me]

Great job on this.. it's short but holds a lot of emotions in it. It sounds like it came straight from your heart. The flow and rhythm of it was really good and held up well.. great job on this!