This is such a fun poem! very cute. i think i think the word-choice was great and made my mouth water(haha) yup but this is a very different poem from the usual..dark poems that i read so it was definetly somewhat of a relief to read such a refreshing little poem! good work! keep it up!
-kayla

Lol
cute, lil kids would like this...mayb as a nursery rhyme

Random piece!! i liked it though. it was a cool lil diddy

much love and many kisses,
bex

Lol very cute! lol it made me laugh because it rought back old memories of me and my older brother getting everything out to make kool aid lol .. good job.. you have a creative side.. and thatis what I like about that good job and keep up the good work 5/5