by emorco08 Mar 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
It hurts to see you like this |
Hey hun next time ur on can u r/c "im sorry" I wrote this one about me (imagine that) but yea since ur not on AIM i figured Id leave ya a msg on here, DJ sent me this poem over AIM and told me u wrote it but yea i wasnt sure if u had it on here, timmy broke up with me today :( he like can over to do it too so when my mom came up to my room she was like "timmy's here to see ya" and I knew right away what he was doing. so yea ill ttyl |
by Kenshin
I try to be as honest as I can. This poem was a good read but it could have been more. I mean by that you could have given it more volume, not in length but in meaning, sometime a few words can give a lot of meaning, but it was a good read and a short one, which i like. |