Wow... Short, sweet and powerful. I love the layout of this poem and how the stanzes ends with a powerful punch. Great write! 5/5

Hey this is great you should try and make a sequel. I know I'd be glad to read it.the first mini paragraph is great.(my personal fave anyways) 5/5

Awesome poem Luv Metalqueen

Very sad poem :) but good :) 5/5

AMAZINGNESS!!!!... if that's a word...
this poem flows so well, and there words you used were just like... wow!
great job!!

Forever*Yours

I loved this, it is one of my favourite's of your's so far.
I thought this piece was very powerful.
You did a wonderful job with this.

Excellent poem, it really enjoyed it. I loved this stanza though, it stood out above the rest

Chained to the floor by hopes and dreams,
blanketed by sorrow,
silent screams.

It flowed so well. 5/5

Another great one.. not my favorite.. but still poeticly wonderful.. interesting strucute

I loved this verse

Chained to the floor by hopes and dreams,
blanketed by sorrow,
silent screams.

your poems are really good. you have a true talent

much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow, this is one of the best poems that i have read. You are a very talented poet and im going to add you to my favorites list.. lol anyway back to the poem. i thought the flow and rhyme was really good. its sad. kinda short but i write short ones to. you got everything you wnated to say out. Great Job.. 5/5

So dark and deceptive, very great, it seems like its straight from the heart

I didn't quite get the meaning of the poem. but i could still feel the emotion, the power behinde the phrases. another great piece of work.5/5

Perfect, even flow...between all stanzas...
reminds me of modern arabic poetry...only with dark meaning...
depressing really...but moving...
a definite 5/5...=D

Ohhhhhh creepyyyyyyy!!!! I give you a 5/5... great job... I have about 80 poems of my own if you'd like to read them....

Oh wow..sadly beautifully written..veryy Dark..but veryy GooD ..I Luved it
U have done a great work..very talented writer..is give u 5/5 ..u deserve it!
-sarah

Wow, incredible poem, very dark and you expressed emotions greatly. I like the metaphors, powerful atmosphere. Every stanza is so effective and unique and this one has superb wording. Well done!

Hauntingly beautiful. A great write.