Great write. Love how it started off as an emotional sad poem and ended with hope and inspiration. Keep writing... 5/5

Excellent poem - it flows really well I hope everything is ok xXx

Peace. [Sole]

Great poem huh it was amazing. keep up the great work and thakns for that sweet comment. it meant a lot to me 5.5

Wow, another great one I see. well read lol. this sounds liek the story (or life which ever u prefer) of a muslim girl hidden behind her head cloth, I love it . and if theres also another meaning that I can see but i still love it.

Wow, this one was deep.
5/5 great poem.

What can I say.. amazing job, very well writin keep them coming take care hun sarah x

I just think this is a great poem - so very well written, and easy flowing! Great job!

Connie

Ur poems r beautiful...ur an awesome poet, u can take my word 4 that...this is beautiful...=)

WOW! incredible
Beautiful poem. Awesome.
love the meter and the rhyme scheme
5/5
♥
~Stephen White

''These eyes are screaming for help,
upon the world's deaf ears,
by sitting and doing nothing,
we might as well be creating their tears.''

I loved this, I think it has to be the best written stanza of your's I have read so far!
This poem was just beautiful, you really have great talent.

AHH im so jelous okaY!!.. you have such a way with words.. your poems just breathe poetry.. especially this one.. i love when you say "upon the words deaf ears" i mean its just so creative.. the flow and rhyme also in this poem are beyond perfect.. thanks for sharing

This poem was amazing its so sad how women in other countries have to live the hardships for men are selfish indiginus pigs i loved it 5/5

You are really good ,I can really feel this poem, things are not always what they seem. great write.

This poem made me angry, i felt so sorry for the women in the poem. it was really well writen.

much love and many kisses,
bex

This the best of what I have read so far. You really kept the reader interested in this mystery.
I really like it.

Wow.. another Great one.. You truly are talented wish i could write as good as you.
This flowed and rhymed really well.
5/5 Keep up the great work!

A great write, and a magnificent read, i was d\so enveloped in the meaning, great job, 5/5

Hey,
wow an awesome poem, the flow is great as well as the rhyming, you have a great talent =)

my favorite stanza:
''These eyes are screaming for help,
upon the world's deaf ears,
by sitting and doing nothing,
we might as well be creating their tears.''

good work
kisses stephanie

This is nice. the flow and structure is good. i just love thed concept of this poem great work. 5/5.

This was done a long time ago but great work now catch my eyes.