by Brian n Josh Mar 7, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Remember in the seventh grade? |
by SchuppXit
Wow, your really good! |
I think this would have been better without the explanation at the end. It just doesn't correspond well with what you'd written, to my mind. But it is very evocative of the delicacy of fledgling friendships and how peer groups interact. Not bad at all for a tender age! Keep at it! :-) |