by emily Mar 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
There is a girl i know |
by emily
Yes i believe in fate. and i believe that every thing happens for a reason. oh and happy news, the friend who i wrote this about is now very very happy with her new boyfriend. thanks for the comments |
by PoetryKnight
Sounds like alot of people now and days. just looking for love. you can't just look for love. it comes to you. let me ask a question. Do You believe in fate. Just a simple Q & A for you. If you want. |
by Hurtingsoul
I have to say great flow its only one in a few poems that has great flow like that. and the rhyming also great job keep it up |
by emily
Oh i guess i should add that while this story is completely true about one of my friends, she did not commit suicide. I know it is weird that i wrote it that way but she told me that she has thought about it and that is what inspired the ending. but thank you for commenting it really means a lot. |
by just a poet
Wow great yet realy sad poem with a signnificant feel. r.i.p. for the girl. what was her name? erm anyway hope ur ok and take care. |