Wow great yet realy sad poem with a signnificant feel. r.i.p. for the girl. what was her name? erm anyway hope ur ok and take care.

Oh i guess i should add that while this story is completely true about one of my friends, she did not commit suicide. I know it is weird that i wrote it that way but she told me that she has thought about it and that is what inspired the ending. but thank you for commenting it really means a lot.
-emily

I have to say great flow its only one in a few poems that has great flow like that. and the rhyming also great job keep it up
TAke care
HS

Sounds like alot of people now and days. just looking for love. you can't just look for love. it comes to you. let me ask a question. Do You believe in fate. Just a simple Q & A for you. If you want.

Yes i believe in fate. and i believe that every thing happens for a reason. oh and happy news, the friend who i wrote this about is now very very happy with her new boyfriend. thanks for the comments