Great poem, I liked it and how it was written.

Awesomely perceptive poem.. i liked the content a lot but thought the flow seemed a bit erratic; could be smoothed out.. sorry so short but this one resonates the same things i've been realizing.. a bit cynical but realistic..

Nice choice of words. I liked the poem and the theme. And i didn't tell you i had new poems because you didn't tell me you had new poems lol. 5/5
-Vino

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:) Lissa