by Meme Mar 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I'm nothing but a darkness in your night |
by Baby Rainbow
I liked this lay out I have done many of these myself with the repetition which sometimes doesnt work but for me, in these cases, it works great and I enjoy it. |
by Lady Nik
Very raw emotions and intense thoughts. Something I can see myself writing when I was younger. Good poem indeed. -Nik |
by mira
Wow just amazing |
You transferred a lot of emotion into this one. I can feel and relate to what you are feeling except for it happened to me :( This is a wonderful poem and the repetition just added power to the statements that followed them... gotta another 5 from me on this one too :) |
by Viola
Aww i love this. there's some deep emotion here. great job! =] |