Hey. I like your poem

5/5

Powerful work, an awesome poem... well done - keep writing

x stabbylou x

Omgosh!! i love it!! SO AMAZING!! i know exactly how you feel!! keep up the writing don't ever stop!!

Wow...great poem...i felt that way with my ex. Xox Laura Marie aka Sweets

Your words are incredible and so full of emotion, you make the reader feel apart of it. GoodJob!

Omigosh.... this is so amazing.. i think the repetitions were kinda monotonous.. however, since i loved ur words and the emotions in the poem, id give this a 5.. the rhyme was gr8 and the flow wasnt that bad.. i esp loved ur last stanza.. and the last line kinda wrapped the whle poem for me.. it was like the conclusion to the "observations" above.. awesome job

take care
keep going
NannO

WOW!! powerful!! short but amazingly to the point!! wonderful job!! keep it up!!

Aww i love this. there's some deep emotion here. great job! =]

You transferred a lot of emotion into this one. I can feel and relate to what you are feeling except for it happened to me :( This is a wonderful poem and the repetition just added power to the statements that followed them... gotta another 5 from me on this one too :)

Wow just amazing
good work

Very raw emotions and intense thoughts. Something I can see myself writing when I was younger. Good poem indeed. -Nik

I liked this lay out I have done many of these myself with the repetition which sometimes doesnt work but for me, in these cases, it works great and I enjoy it.

Well done