Great one Nitin! i like the line" mirrors don't recognise me anymore"

nice way to express what happens when one falls in love!

thanks for your wonderful comments. good luck to you always.

shobhana

'Sitting there right next to a window
and watching strangers walking by
i know the one you are looking for
the one living just a bit further from the end of sky'

I adore this stanza since I know what exactly you meant. When you love someone, the distance always seems further. I know the feeling very well.

Beautiful poem. Loved every word of it. Keep it up with your love poems and I salute the one that is inspiring you to love such sweet poems. Must be one heck of a girl, am I right? lol....

Love every bit
Michelle

"staring at my finger tips and wondering
if for once it could touch the edge of your hair"

simply love these lines....
wonderful poem.

thanks for your comments.

ranju

Wow... i think u should write love poems forever... it makes me fall in love over and over again..i mean, u mentioned even the most simple moments so beautifully.. i loved this poem.. it was.. it was the best love poem i've ever read... great job.. i mean even saying that isn't enough...
and rating it a 5 is really low.. i would rate it like a 50...lol

Much Love,
Ipsita

Absolutely wonderful! You should continue to write lvoe poems, you are very good at them. They are not completely sappy... tehy are true, with romance and god.. they are just so beautiful. I lvoe reading them.
stretching as if i could reach to the end of sky
opening eyes and realizing no one is there

I love those lines.. beautiful.
well waht else would i give u other than 5/5.. as usual
keep it up. take care hun
Monique

An absolutely beautiful write. Flowed perfectly and your choice of words really impacted. Loved the 5th stanza.
Cheers. (PS - Neat name change too ... great reflection)

Firstly, I absolutely love the poem! It's so wonderful, and the words hold such beauty and grace! Oh, heaven!! (Sorry. I got a little carried away.) Secondly, the name change is perfect. Just thought I might let you know that.

hugs and smiles,
Mary

Hii nitin ,

Great poem again , such heartfelt poem ,ur way of expressing feelings thru words is exeptional.

thanks for commenting , yes im very fortunate to have such wonderful person as my best frnd.Hopefully will be regular now.

Regards
chavii.

Hi Nitin
u r awesome sir......... y didnt u write love poems before.....u r too good at this.....i loved this poem.....u deserve 5/5

all the best

Bharti

Gr8 job, I loved it. 5/5... keep writting!

::MELI::

It's cool Nitin, sorry, took me so looooooooong....2 comment on ur poems, well, u surely hev improve a lot, unlike me...hehe...still not writing any, it's cool...

Great poem nitin!! omg it was great.
I agree with what everyone else says so i dont have much to add onto!
Thankyou for your email..i keep forgetting whether i wrote back or not:S!
Your writing has simply excelled..don't stop.
Much love
>torn -x.x.x-

First of all, thank you for the comment! and second of all.... your write is beautiful. It was put together perfectly. I love how you used the Sky as your "theme" ... it was beautiful...

heidi.may

It's such a beautiful poem and the first stanza is great! I liked each & every line of this poem.

I really like this. . .it's sweet and shows the love
check out my poems sometime, i will check out more of yours as well
~*~Amber~*~

"here lying on the bed all alone
and watching wings of my dreams flyin by"

That line totally got me!
I loved this whole poem, it was so sweet and so love filled.
*chorus of awwws in my head*
5/5
*Gem*

This is a beautiful poem yet so sad. The pain seeps from your words.
Here lying on bed all alone
and watching wings of my dreams flyin by
Do you know that I only think about you now
as I feel my dreams touching your skin at the end of the sky

I feel this so many times. Wishing I could fly and just disappear.
Excellent job! Thinking of you Dost. Love Cindy