Dear Mom and Dad 2nd

by EMOtion1987   Mar 7, 2006


Dear mom and dad
I'm leaving this note on the bathroom floor
I'm writing you my final score
Don't worry because you guys were the best I ever had
But my life has gone to the dogs
I continue to walk through days with heavy fogs
My eyes grow dreary and heavy with self doubt
I'm told day after day, you're just a bad note.
I'm like a garden while there's a draught
I'm just a sunken boat

Dear mom and dad
The world is a cruel, dark place
It has made it clear that I should not be in this space.
And I'm a good girl I swear
So I leave you my teddy bear
Along with this note
Along with a kiss
Along with my heart
That was torn apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    That's almost heart warming in a weird kind of way. Really well written. 5/5
    Helen

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Excellent poem, I really like it. It's sad and sweet, exactly how I feel.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ripple

    Wow i really liked part 1... really great.. all my love xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by NicholasRyan

    Dude thats sad..grea thouh