This is a vrry personal poem...it is am encouragement for thsoe around me and for myself ot keep going even when you get down. Tiem are tough for me, I haveGod, family, friends, and my boyfriend but sumtimes I loose site of what I've got and I forget that I have things to catch mee when I fall..and that all I gotta do is face the music. LISSA**

I think this has a really great meaning!! and it is very well written keep up the good work!

Wow... amazing message and poem!! i love your style of writing, very original. wow.... i really ADORE this poem!! well done. keep it up!
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Wow i absolutely adore this poem!! first you begin it so strongly by saying "the music starts wen youre near" and later as if thats not enough you say "wen youre HERE." im totally in love with that.
and i also completely agree with wat uve ritten down...of how we always must keep going, no matter what happens. hope is always there, until we ourselves send it away.

Take care girl, you cannot begin to imagine how much each of your comments means to me! i remember i had promised you i'd comment on all ur poems soon...and i havnt forgotten that...but my exams are still going lol...theyre ending on the 23rd of march...i promise i'll do that afterwards. keep writing lissa, and thanks once again for making me feel wonderful with your comments, and this poem. it really gave me hope. youve helped a soul!

Dhaval

This is a work of art unto its self...i love the rhyme scheme, and how you've written it. and i agree with the moral of this. its just that when times get hard, and you lose the very ones you go to for support, thats when it gets hard to keep moving...i know i dont have the worst life, but sometimes it sure as hell feels that way....but to all of the readers, you just gotta remember, never give up hope, because theres always tomorrow