by Luke Mar 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Our bond is strong.. |
This is sweet.......i love it |
by Simon Hayes
I agree with Darien - There is always so much to learn! You have started great and your poetry improves with every line... I really like this one, it's very caring and warm. Great work :) |
by Darien
Very nice poem Luke. Your writing is quite good. Keep up the good work. You will learn a lot from this group, and it will help you to grow as a poet. So far you have overcome the use of Caps At Every Word :P there is still much to learn, and even someone like me is still learning. It's so much fun :) |