Ok, maybe I should of wrote this at the end of the poem...but this is not a real poem...it was just something I was thinking, so I wrote it down...that is all.

Wow, with the feeling ur put in i was ready to beleive it was real but then u r a bit young but who am i tro talk?
anyway great poem loved it. could u check out some of my poems aswell? thanx

Hi Jooooooooooooe.
This was excellent, I liked how you put yourself in a asituation you are not really in.
I would comment much better, But I have to go.
I'm sorry, this was an interesting read well done.x

Very nicely written! i know its just a poem dear! but still full of feelings......5/5