Nicely written...from the heart.

This stanza:

Do you see the pain shes silently hiding? Do you see a heartache shes silently fighting?

Try this for flow:

Do you see the pain she silently hides? Can you feel the heartache she is silently fighting?

Your last sentence appears to be missing an "r" in ever.

Your style is awesome! Keep writing.

Lol thanks! i wonder how that happened lol