Wow, this poem was compelling. good choice of words and put forth of emotions. from what my gf tells me, this is what she feels as well. great job 5/5
Driver

Wow, so beautifuly written, It s a great romance poem, i really like the way you used a word to give the message which is IN FRONT OF YOU
i think it is so cute, you have great poems

I like this poem a lot. Mainly because it reminds me of...me. Lol. I liked the flow in some places, but in others, it wasn't exactly all that well lol. Still, great job. You really let your feelings come out onto paper (or computer screen =P ) Keep it up! =) xoxo 5/5

Samantha

Wow. this was really great. i liked the varied length in the lines and the constant change in structure. it was heaps easy to read and i loved the story behind it. Really really beautiful : D 5/5
-Suzie