My secret love

by mely   Mar 7, 2006


A secret love is what i have for you
wish i could tell but that would be so untrue
the secret of loving you
is like a flower in bloom or like a waterfall that never ends
or like the stars in the sky above
thats the secret of loving you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    I really like the similies in this poem, but the thing i dont like so much is how they are completely unrelated to the subject of secret love. if you make them more alike, like something sweet, yet secret like.... hm... cant think of anything right now (LOL!) anyways, thats all i have to say for now...

    p.s- could you check out one of my poems? thanks

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