Good like always!!It makes me think of my crazy love life!!!

You said everything i dreamed of about love, but you where carefull not to get to deep, which meens you're guarded, and that is a relief for me, cause that's the same way i feel..... alll the time. this one i could read forever and it would never get old. you are a expert at being straightforward as much as you want to, all the while making the reader feel as though you are talking straight to them. when i read this expression of appreciation and love for all life, it makes me see a new you, and now i know your heart, you are a beautifull person through and through, always. there are alot of things to hate in this world, but hate is such a worn out emotion that never forgets, that never forgives, that never lets go. that's why i wanted to read your heart about what you have in life, for a change, and not what you dont have. you can want and want some more, but wanting will never achieve. action, be it words through the resource of a computer, or better yet, through the origin of the speaker, will always accomplish, it never fails.
so this is what i think of your heart in this poem..... honest, open (to some degree) and pure. 10 out of 10 from me my friend. and 5 for this damn website.... lol ;)
phil

I just wanted to say thank you again for writing this, i've never had a friend who wrote, let alone someone that did requests. you truly care and that's what seperates you from everyone else. thank you agian for being open.
peace,
wench.

Thats a grrt poem and im absolutely blindsided now....u hav such dark poems that this one came as a shock, it had good flow but could be better, and i loved the way u asked questions...the way u portray love is so beautiful, yet decieving...tho it is all u said, it is also a curse....i see ur viewpoint and once again this is an excellent poem....srry i havent been on for a while, its been hectic.....
love ya lots,
sore

I love it you covered so much maybe you would like my poem " I WISH" or MAGICAL KISSEs

Excellent poem