This is a really good poem and I look forward to reading more, It flows and has a sence of rhytm. Good Job
~.~ Mia ~.~

Its good i like it and i love your style of poetry its diffrrent and kits kinda a happy depressing i guss thats what i would call it i mist say five words YOUR ONE OF MY FAV!!!
5/5 KEP UP THE GOOD WORK
~Dustin
P.S thanks for the comment

Woooo it rocks!!!!

Awsome 5/5

Kool