another wonderful one lisa but that doesnt shock me...great job..

Your poems always open my eyes to the hard reality in life these days and how messed up it is sometimes, i think ur best poem by far is remarkable boy, or somethin liek that, whatever it was it was great, adn it relates to this one, life...and how it is thse days, i think ur a truely gifted writer, and from waht i see a BEAUTIFUL LOVING person, who obviously cares so much about the important things in this world, your are an amazing writer, and i'll always look for you! So keep writing! :-D

This is one of my favourites now. It's going to be a favourite with the younger people and adults too. At first I thought it was going to be a poem about a singled out child, taunted or abused, but then it turned out to be someone being left in a home. very sad but i thought it was brilliant. Well done Lisa, K