Comments : Faking the Smile..

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe. Bertha. You can trust me. you know that. I love you more than anything in the entire world. i also love this poem more than anything in the entire world. you are an amazing writer, person, and friend. i love you so damn much.

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    I can relate to this well this is an excellent poem with lots of feelings 5/5 good work and keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    I want to thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poems. It means to world to me. And I love your writing as well!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Fantastic poem, got nothing negitive to say at all. the content is strong and the peice flows well thoughout

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow, that really is a sad poem. I enjoyed reading it though. So great Job. :)