Genious. I am predicting a top spot on the sad poetry sections for a while. It was a great read and a wonderful write. Good job.

This was really good but you should maybe fix these:

Its an ice cold feelig
Running thru (through your) you veins(.)

Its (It's) wanting to cry
But not waning (wanting I think you meant) to be heard
Wanting to be ok
But unable to say the words

Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your poems.

Cool. I liked it lots but you spelled through like thru... was that on purpose? Oh well. Nice poem

Since you said not to correct the spelling so I wont, lol this poem wasnt bad, it showed some real emotion.

This is powerful and very emotional yeah there were a few mistakes but all in all great poem!

WOW!! this is just amazing.. i love every single word and line (i cudve sed letter, but i dont think letters can stand on their own:P) i just love ur rhyme.. more than that, ur flow never faltered.. i read this poem twice btw.. it was just so gr8 and true..
gr8 job
5/5
take care
NannO

Short but no less powerful. I liked the imagery and ideas you toyed with here. Easy to relate to the contrasting phrases placed at juxtaposition really brought out the conflict and contrasts...Excellent...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I loved this poem. Great Job. It has alot of meaning aswell. I adore your work.

This is true-very true and very well portrayed. You right in a very matter-of-fact way and i think that's very interesting. Good Work

Sondos

Wow that is really good. I love the way that you described it. I especially liked the 2nd stanza, I could definitely relate to that. You did a great job on this!

This ROCKS! A short poem, But straight to the point.
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It's wanting to cry
But not wanting to be heard
Wanting to be ok
But unable to say the words
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Loved that stanza. It was so good. Keep it up =P 5/5

`taleee xx