by Void Mar 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
"Stop Yelling!" The first words I have said in days, and they burst out of my mouth causing a painfully loud silence as my family looked around at one another. All they had been doing for days were fighting, everyone mad at everyone else. This time it was Grahams fault for not being smart enough to hide the booze from Mom and Dad ahead of time; however Mom and Dad never once thought maybe they knew better and could handle themselves. I'm only just celebrating my twelfth birthday and I know better than they do... |
by Delie
I think this story is really great, keep up the good work and contiue writing it |
by Tom Swart
I hope you make it through all your days.. good work. |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Wow, that is so sad. Very unique and imaginative. Wish you the best of luck, Take Care! |
by Ike Dizzle
Wow. That's terrible. NOt the poem but the situation. Nice imagery i love the whole thing. keep it up |
Hi There!! |