by SaMmE! Mar 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Breaking through the darkness I see no light, |
Samme i love you girl*kisses*4 real |
by Leah
This is good. start to develop rythem to your poetry. and listen for syllables in words. |
by Milton
That was really sad. you get the idea of how sad at the end. good stuff. |
Shot nice poem samme. keep up the good stuff |