Emma!

Damnnnnnnn girl! lol this is... wow. I love your opening stanza, and your finishing line like holy hannah! Your writing never leaves me wondering, you always improve. I envy you! lol, keep it up and never give up on the creative and innovative path

Love
Jenn

It is very good, i realy liked the colours bit and theyre right, ir was rather amazing!! xxx

Hey hun this poem was great omg o love it each and every line, very nice. love your poems hope your ok...... xooxxo Rach

I l0ve this poem hun, it put a smile on my face 4 the day...it really inspired me...luv ya always maddy xxx

That's a beautiful poem emma, absolutely wonderful, it's so nice to see a change here. i love it, it's SPESHUL :D xxxxxxxxxxx

It feels like it's been an eternity since you posted a poem, and I must say that the wait was well worth it. WOW, GIRL! You blew this one out of the water. Completely amazing!!!!!!!

hugs and smiles,
Mary

Ahh babes dis is beautiful hun i hearts it :D

Amazing-loved it!

This is an amazing poem, you have such a strong flow, and a beautiful choice of words to convey your idea :) It's really nice and thoughtful, well done x

I FREAKING love it!
LMFAO

A beautiful piece of work - this poem is really fantastic! you have a great way with words and the rhyme scheme flows amazingly well!

great job

good luck and peace
shobhana

I loved how you described it with colours..great touch. This inspired me too..wow..well done.
im in awe..
xxx

Such a good poem...=) really awesome