A night to remember

by jessie   Mar 8, 2006


Maybe I was out of my mind,
When I thought you would be mine,
You were graceful and incredibly kind,
And your body was so damn fine,

I cried last night like all the rest,
Pictures of us going through my head,
I felt free to fly and land in your nest,
A place that is now lost and dead.

I still want to love you with all my heart,
Being my first, you will last for a while,
I hate myself for forgetting my smarts,
Now I run, falling harder every mile.

You said you loved me for being unique,
Holding me tight, leaving those red marks,
I hate to write like I want to critique,
But my soul is shadowed with a haze so dark.

I remember our bodies moving together,
Moving up and down, slow to fast,
I believed we could be forever,
Or at least love me for time that would last.

I will remember you forever,
Your parents shouldn't stop us,
Making our next meet never,
Leaving behind our passionate lust.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megan Michaud

    Sooo good!!! :) I loved it, it's so sad though :( But I bet it made u feel better though right? je t'aime oxoxo~Meg

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashly Piercen

    The sun sees not till the clouds clear...shakespeare

    the sun being.....reason.. sometimes, i know,its weird, butifi feel too strongly about a certain subject, its just harder to writei ti down in a poem clearly, its like emotional block. but like yah obviously sometimes i can or esle i woudlnt have poetry. id tell you everythings going to be alright but that so old and oer said ill leave that to other people. Ill just say "lots of love"

  • 18 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    Haha I was the first to read it! it real good. i love it, i think it my favorite one out of all of yours so far. keep it up and i swear it'll get better. he's a jerk for doing what he did and you deserve so much better, u might not see it now, but you will soon enough. i love you & I'm there if ya need me. xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Aww thats so sweet! very good hunn! luv ya-xxx-