by Emma Mar 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Never once felt your touch |
by hezha murad
Wow,, great peoms,, u can write..i love this poem, decribes me kindof. |
by azlan26
'fears are taken away' great line |
It cam out nicely....organization was o.k. you might want to work on the ending a little bit but yeah thats just my opinion..and pretty good emotion imagery in some parts |
Wow! that's good! |