Wow! that's good!

It cam out nicely....organization was o.k. you might want to work on the ending a little bit but yeah thats just my opinion..and pretty good emotion imagery in some parts

'fears are taken away' great line
it feel right when they are there - and sometimes wrong . . .
great poem again :)
Keep writing

Wow,, great peoms,, u can write..i love this poem, decribes me kindof.