Heartbroken again for you

by mandieD   Mar 8, 2006


As we lay in bed lastnight you said all we had was gone.
now i sit here crying softly wondering what i\'ve done.
you said we had no future but we hardly had a past.
seems to me you slip into my life and disappear again too fast.
for months you went from me to her and her to me again.
what happened this time i dont know you were with me and then...
\"we\'re over. we\'re through there is no me and you\"
i thought you loved me i thought it was true.
you left my bed and packed your stuff to go back to your mother.
i thought we were certain i thought there was no other.
you asked me if i would be ok to which i whispered \"no\"
if it would have done any good i\'d have asked you not to go.
but you stood there looking sad and guilty, of the crime of leaving me
but without you darling i dont know what my life will be.
i\'ll miss you so very much you know this and it\'s true.
no matter where you go in life i will always be loving you.
i feel empty of emotion now, a husk of female parts.
you came to me with smiles, and with kisses broke my heart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Hey sweety i loved your poem! i feel the exact same way about my ex! and its a terrible feeling! i hate it! but as they all say! you can never feel sad for a too long period of time! and you can never blame yourself for wats happen! i know that sounds stupid! but its true!
    Please look read and comment on my poems! id really appreciate it if u did!
    love paige! xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by mandieD

    Ty for pointin that error out to me lol

    and thanks everyone for all their lovely comments on my poems.

    lots of love to you all.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Amazing poetry - I really loved the description in your poem, though I think the title should be 'Heartbroken . . .' not 'Hearbroken . . .'
    :) Hope that helps, I also think you could have broken it up a little better, perhaps out of one section and into rhyming couplets? Excellent description, and a really good flow, the rhymes were also brilliant.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    Great poem, very well written flowed beautifully, keep up the great work : )

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    That shows a lot of feeling and i know what you're going through because i just broke up with my BF and i miss him so much
    5/5 good work n keep it up
    xoxXxox pip

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