Wow thats fab i don't know what to say i just have to admit that you are the best wirter so keep it up hunny

It was a great poem. I'm to old and to jaded to feel that way now but i rember when i was capable of it. Chear up another love will come when you least expect it.

This was a great great poem im so sorry that you guys broke up i hope you feel better
if you ever wanna talk im here okz

I'm sorry about your break-up, hope you feel better soon. Nicely written though. Full of feelings and emotions. Great write! 5/5

"from me to her and her to me" - yeah that was and still sortve is my situation and it takes a little piece every time. i love the ending line....great poem, loved it

That shows a lot of feeling and i know what you're going through because i just broke up with my BF and i miss him so much
5/5 good work n keep it up
xoxXxox pip

Great poem, very well written flowed beautifully, keep up the great work : )

Amazing poetry - I really loved the description in your poem, though I think the title should be 'Heartbroken . . .' not 'Hearbroken . . .'
:) Hope that helps, I also think you could have broken it up a little better, perhaps out of one section and into rhyming couplets? Excellent description, and a really good flow, the rhymes were also brilliant.

Peace. [Sole]

Ty for pointin that error out to me lol

and thanks everyone for all their lovely comments on my poems.

lots of love to you all.

Hey sweety i loved your poem! i feel the exact same way about my ex! and its a terrible feeling! i hate it! but as they all say! you can never feel sad for a too long period of time! and you can never blame yourself for wats happen! i know that sounds stupid! but its true!
Please look read and comment on my poems! id really appreciate it if u did!
love paige! xoxo