Ohh i like this one alot its like your haveing an argument with your self and your tellhin to make you stay but he aint listing. it was great it reminded me of something i lost along time ago.
5/5
~Dustin

Aw wow, This is sad, Loved it how you kept repeating "ask me to stay". Really good poem, Keep up the good work =]

- natz x0x

Oh n P.S 5/5 I LOVED it!

I can feel the emotions in the piece. My only suggestion is the presentation of the piece, if it was in stanzas, it might flow a bit better. That's only my opnion of course. Good write though! Keep up the good work! 5/5